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Aussie ads are just lol.

I'm pretty sure that is the way rugs are sold throughout Australia.
I could just tell this was an aussie ad parody by how lame and ridiculous they are, we have a place called 'Doors Plus' and it is pretty much exactly like your parody. Big doors, small doors, garage doors, doors for your pets etc.

That aside, the animation was fine, the main aim was just to get the message visually and in a funny way and I think you achieved that. Trying to make some really amazing animation for a joke just gets lost anyway, like cyanide and happiness. They have similar animation to get a joke across.

Anyway, as long as you had fun putting this together thats the main thing right?

:)

Brilliant

The Narrating didn't seem necessary, the way you showed the character visually required no words however I guess it always helps to have some background spoken.

I had to smile at the end though, after the scene where he jumped into the air I thought 'that would be cool on a shirt' and at the end of the flash there it was.

Great stuff Adam.

Nice change

It is a nice change to see something a little more lighter on this sight.

I must say however, I was expecting some sick twist like the kid drowning at the end but I guess you expect that kind of thing these days lol.

Nice work, could of used abit more attention to detail for such a short clip though.

Crazy cat

I just took a trip down memory lane when someone asked you to do hentai and you were like "Thats a preposterous idea!" (Blatant exaggeration) and now you have a full blown flash game which is your first which is cool.

Setting aside the whole hentai thing I think you did a really good job for your first flash and I'm glad you put in the quality your capable of, also the creativity.

I didn't full look into this but did you add keyboard shortcuts?

Just a suggestion to help fix the whole clicking on the drop down menus.

That way you could make her whinge about positions more and get the user to remember what key each position was and make them think more.

8 for the flash and an extra one for submitting it nice work.

Also that angel picture is awesome I have to say for the second time.

Okay I think thats pretty much everything.

Oh one last thing why Vortex 00? Any particular reasoning behind that one?

Okay now I'm done.

Broken?

The tutorial wouldn't go any further? I'm not sure how helpful this is for others but I don't think flash tutorials are what people want to see on this site.

Good attempt

Good attempt though I feel submissions need alot of effort to be accepted on this site, though there are exceptions.

Cruise control for sound

This song just makes me feel like I'm in the back of a car, cruising along the freeway. Laying on the back seat looking up and seeing all the lights and colours zooming past me as my head moves with the beat and I smile.

You created some magic here.

Strangely exciting

This had a really strange beat, I like all the sounds you put into it.

It gave it a really frantic upbeat kind of feel which I thought was strange but cool.

Could go further I think but really good nonetheless good job.

Nice Harmony

I liked the title, and the harmony it was a very empathetic piece.

Only crit I have is the ending ends so quickly, I feel it should end as it began to make this a more timeless song.

Thanks for sharing this.

Lovely

The only reason why I gave this a 6 is because I know you can do a lot more than what you done here. If this a woman dancing on stars it would a lot higher score.

Judging from your last picture of a girl's face you could create the woman dancing on the stars!

I know you could do it, or even try a new piece of art. You are getting a grip of shading which is nice I can see the development from your first picture.

Be well PenguinBars.